Narrative Check List

I think I could involve the reader in a little more. After rereading my narrative it felt boring, I was thinking I didn't focus on the event but more the other stuff that happened before the event and maybe the thing I chose to write about might be to boring and maybe I should switch to something else i could expand on, focus and add more details to it and not just fill up with fillers. I didn't really have dialoge I did but I don't know if that is enough or not. From my story I think I did grow from it but I'm not sure how to show that in my paper.I don't think people got the point and there wasn't a real meaning to it.